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THEY'RE GETTING READY TO FIGHT A BATTLE, DURNIT!
James is not going to be passively telling jokes and entertaining the ensigns!!!
that is all I have to say.
or not..
Just make it have a little more tension to it. The readers are just basically passively watching...