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Napoleonic Fiction 6 - Start of Battle

by Firestarter
  • April 20, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter
  • Old awful stuff
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Sam
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Sam wrote a review · Thu Apr 21, 2005 7:20 pm

THEY'RE GETTING READY TO FIGHT A BATTLE, DURNIT!

James is not going to be passively telling jokes and entertaining the ensigns!!!

that is all I have to say.

or not..

Just make it have a little more tension to it. The readers are just basically passively watching...



here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings