Oh gracious... that was beautiful. I really liked the play on words in the title; it's clever.
My favourite line other than that was most definitely "Your skin is so soft it feels like innocence". That is such a wonderful description. I would never think of anything like that, but the description is so perfect... Ah man, perfect.
I really like this overall. It's so simple and sweet and romantic, yet holds a hint of something deeper. Nice work, as usual, Jack.
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