Young Writers Society

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You know Dave!

Now, to the review. So, I think that you could've came up with a better
opening line than what you did. It was enough to pull me in, because I absolutely LOVE Gemmell. I also think that you should have included some about his childhood and teenage years. I found that to be interesting. Maybe you should've put in a bit about Legend, so the readers would know what they're dealing with. Not that it needed one-- Athey should know Legend is a good book because we told them. Also, you could talk about one or two other books, as a recommendation accompanying Ledgend.
Just Saying...

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I have never heard of David Gemmel. In fact, I have never even read any fantasy in my whole life--well, I read King Arthur and The Chronicles of Narnia...do they count? Lol, I doubt it.
But I can never seem to find time to really search for good fantasy books..the ones I've picked up and started have all turned out to be wack. So I guess David Gemmel? A good recomendation? Perhaps...I'll check him out.