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The League of Ordinary Gentlemen Chapter 1

by Firestarter



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Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:52 pm
Blink says...



Locked.

Please don't bump old threads, unless the author has specifically asked you to.




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Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:05 pm
mkjohns says...



LOL THE TITLE CAUGHT MY EYE. I LOVE THE MOVIE!




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Wed Mar 16, 2005 4:23 pm
Firestarter says...



Fair enough! I didn't want to make it long and put people off.

Put it all in the original post, with another update.




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Wed Mar 16, 2005 2:30 am
Incandescence says...



Jack, I still liked it, but it seems like you were just trying to get points with the excessive add-ons. Put them all in the same, original post, and it will be much easier to read.




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Thu Mar 10, 2005 6:04 pm
Firestarter says...



Wow, thanks guys! You've inspired me to write some more!




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Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:16 am
Nai says...



This was awesome!!!

LOL I loved the descriptions of the three and the comical eye brow raise

Awesome job, if it was a book i'd buy it.




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Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:04 am
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This is begnining to ring me back to the time when I wasn't born or can even recall... nice job I liked this.... so did my dad he's chuckling... now he's rolling on the floor... now he's laughing hard.. softer... ... now he's not moving :P




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Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:01 am
Sam says...



Yeah, i have to agree with brad.

This is pretty good...not my favorite story of all time but I'd like to read the other 9,000 words. :D




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Sun Mar 06, 2005 4:55 pm
Incandescence says...



This made me chuckle. Good job.





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