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fortis the Fortieth's Log



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Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:39 pm
Rook says...



Fortieth Knight Fortis! Onward to DESTINY!
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Awards earned:
My knighthood:
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A Sword: Staraliantaron
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A Shield: Soultriaton
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A Helm: Rochetiset
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A Horse: Squishy
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Full Armor: The Microwave
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A Lance: Negligence
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Coat of arms: Thriller
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Golden Chalice: Sodapop
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Special awards:
Participated in the library event:
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The Scribe Badge:
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The After Watch:
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The Shrubbery:
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Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:39 pm
Rook says...



To become a knight!


She fiercely fought her first few battles, armed with nothing but a keyboard and fire in her blood. Valiantly, she tackled all ten of her foes and moved from squire to knight.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:40 pm
Rook says...



~The Beginning of a New Chapter~

Fortis. The Fortieth Knight. She humbly bowed to Knight Hannah as she received her first KotGR badge, and a feast in her honor. She looked bravely ahead to all the adventures that awaited her. "First," she determined, "I must arm myself appropriately!"

For a bright shiny new sword!



She finished off the final battle and smiled a smile of one who loves the scent of revisions. "More!" She shouted, brandishing her new sword (which she had dubbed "Staraliantaron"), "I need more!"
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:40 pm
Rook says...



For a shield!


Fortis noticed her fighting skills improving. Her reviews were getting more helpful and she felt some pride in finishing off the last reviews to get her shield, which she dubbed "Soultriaton." She looked ahead to more improvement and something to cover her head.
Last edited by Rook on Sat Dec 07, 2013 5:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:41 pm
Rook says...



For a helmet!


Through a couple quick battles, fortis the fortieth Gained a magic helm. She dubbed this helmet "Rochetiset." When worn, it made the middle segments of all her fingers invisible! Pretty amazing huh? Now if only she could reach the poems at the further end of the kingdom...
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Of course of course! I need a horse!


I shall name him squishy and he shall be mine.
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fortis the Fortieth chopped down more works out of the green room. "Yum!" she said, "I'm growing to love these greens!"
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Mon Dec 09, 2013 1:14 pm
Rydia says...



Knight Fortis, I am afraid that you were not the first or second to review the work 'Simple Hello' so you must venture once more into that dark forest before we can award you a horse.
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 5:36 pm
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@Rydia Jenn's comment was not a review.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Tue Dec 10, 2013 12:18 am
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My apologies, I counted from the wrong side! I humbly seek your forgiveness and you will be awarded a horse forthwith.
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Fri Jan 03, 2014 11:33 pm
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For FULL ARMOR! (heck yeah)


Bravely fighting her way through The World Cup review day, fortis the fortieth cut down her next ten reveiws to earn her full armor. She promptly dubbed it The Microwave.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Sun Jan 05, 2014 3:15 pm
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Knight Fortis, it is with great pleasure that I award you your full armor. Congratulations and godspeed!
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Tue Jan 28, 2014 6:32 pm
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For a Jousting Lance! ooh how fun! (I get to impale people after these next ten reviews! For sport!)
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46. The longest break ever
47. Bedroom Thoughts
48. An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat) (I'm not quite sure that this was in the green room when I reviewed it...)
49. Rusted Hearts
50. Empty Palette
51. Down and Out
52. Watch Me Burn
53. Penny Rings
54. Natural disasters
55. Bang

Rather forgetting the cause she was fighting for, knight fortis the Fortieth earned a lance without realizing it. In memorial for her forgetfulness, she named her lance negligence.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Mon May 12, 2014 1:55 am
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For a beautiful record of history! A coat of arms! :D

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98. Coffee
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100. Gaius


It was a long fight, it was a hard fight. The battle raged all around, for months and months. But eventually the foes all fell before valiant knight fortis the fortieth! Stading in a field of desecrated works and ones that had bowed to her judgement, she accepted the coat of arms that was conferred upon her with a regal air.
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:51 am
Rook says...



For one of dem fancy bejewled chalices.

I swear I got like three million green girdles during this. D; But no one is a knight u_u

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101. Water Lily in the Wind
102. Mari Onette
103. .
104. Silent Beauty
105. Pyro, pa
106. The Bullet
107. Minds like found art
108. Cabinet Centerpiece
109. Just a Dream
110. Don't Look at the flame
111. Phaedra
112. rosa borealis
113. It's Been Fun, Percy
114. Autotonomy and Apoptosis
115. Monument
116. A man - A poem inspired by "The Scream" by Edvard Munch, 1893
117. kaleidoscopic whirls
118. Morning Breeze
119. Beast of Beauty
120. The shortest halloween poem ever
121. Imagine - The Health Food Edition
122. Fear
123. Mellowing a Mare
124. Her
125. Cuils
126. Save him from this darkness
127. An Illustration to: The Womb of My Affections
128. Nicoteen
129. Untitled (For Now)
130. For Crysi
131. Inside a Sheep Skull
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dubbed: Sodapop

After these series of long battles (including going to the farthest reaches of the kingdom to seek out a shrubbery to cut down to appease the knights of Ni! add to her trophy room), fortis, the fortieth knight was exhausted. She realized how much more work it was to obtain a bejeweled chalice than it was to receive many of her other prizes. That's what comes with greater honor and chivalry, she thought. Nevertheless, she steeled her grit and determination to forge onward in bravery.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses




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Sun Mar 08, 2015 7:18 pm
Rook says...



A chest of Silver for the Lady! (bling bling~)

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With an insane burst of reviewing for the August 2015 review day, fortis exploded into her chest of silver, letting the coins run through her hands. It was a good day. A good, good day. She'd be spending the money on mostly dark chocolate and stocks.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses







Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
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