Hey there! Since this work has been in the Green Room since September, I shall rescue it from the Green Room!
This was very different, and interesting. I have never read a poem like this before. I don't really know any of the "soundtracks." The title though is very generic and cliche. You need to make it different and think of something that hasn't been used before. Also, as Widdershins said, make it more imaginative and make it better. Trust me, it will improve if you do. Don't give up and always write!
-CaptainSaltWater
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