Hi there, reisepiecy. Storybraniac here to review the longest break ever for Paint the roses red (yeah we rock). This is a very nice piece. I liked the ending part as usual
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Because to say I love myself
more than I love you would be a lie,
and that's not right.
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Baby, this is wrong.
And I think fortis's right about planes and plains. I think you should correct it. But overall this is a very good poem. Keep writing. A definite like from me.
Storybraniac.
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Reviews: 66
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