I recently borrowed a haiku anthology from the library I've come to realize that they can be just as expressive as other types of poetry. I really love some of yours and you were creative about the topics and rhythmical aspects. It's difficult to criticize haiku, which is great ^^ I have nothing at all to insult whatsoever.
The cascading leaf
Slowly plummets t'ward the ground;
The blessing of Fall.
I like this one because it is different from some haikus I see. I like how you removes the "o" from "toward" to make it appear more poetic. I also like how you chose to capitalize the season.
Write more haikus!
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