Wow, this good. I don't even know where to start reviewing. I love each and every line. This is a really deep, simply amazing poem.
You have really strong imagery and your word choice is excellent. Beyond excellent even. You use such incredibly rich detail I could almost believe I was reading an actual illustration.
One thing I'd like to comment on though:
A fingernail scraping
across a chalkboard.
This is such a cliche image and I know you could come up with something better than that to describe the noise.
Otherwise, great poem!!!!
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