How did you think up such a terrifyingly beautiful poem? How much pain could one have been in to go through with this? I ask myself these questions, and though I may not yet know the answers, I can't begin to let you know how formidable this poem is. I mean, seriously. You're just about my age and writing mind-boggling pieces of art. Like, can you pass on the inspiration and talent?? You have mad skill.
Your setup of the poem is perfect with four lines containing only 20 words. Well let me tell you, those 20 words sure did make a difference to not only me, but others as well after you posted it on here. I've got to read more work by you.
I'm only on 5% battery so I have to make this quick. This is awesome. This is amazing. You should be featured for this so everyone can see your work, these few 20 words. If we ever had a writing challenge to write an amazing story in 20 words even, you'd win first place right off the bat.
XD I'm glad I'm following you. Because you are an extraordinary writer and hint hint you should pass out some of that extra skill to those who could use it. way to go!!
Your new found friend/mind-boggled,
~Freak
awesomeeee
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