Hello, InTheTrees!
Well, first of all, this is a very interesting poem you made here. I love the imagery and details of the poem. I can honestly see this happening in my head. My favorite lines were:
The story climaxes with your hands sewn to her shirt,
Each finger in a buttonhole,
Keeping her fragile chest intact.
I can honestly see this happening the most. Anyways, I see no errors in this poem as far as I know of. Keep the good work! I would like to read more! C:
-K
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