Young Writers Society

I simply love this poem. It's short and not so sweet. It gets right to the point and tells you what the reader what you were trying to achieve. I love this poem very much.
The only sort of criticism I have for this is piece is to divide it into stanzas and possibly make it a longer lyric poem. That way, you can incorporate a few metaphors in before closing it off with your message.
Nevertheless, it's beautiful just the way that it is. Thank you for the beautiful poem and keep writing.

Hi,
This poem is beautifully structured and i usually don't like short poems but i love this one. I lost my nana a few years ago and this has summed up how i felt at the time. I don't really have anything bad to say about this poem except maybe you could extend it further, however it is fine as it is. I also really love the last two lines, they really underline the whole poem and make it a very powerful piece.
A.P

Hello!
First off, this was a really beautiful poem. It really was. It was so simple, yet so emotional. Great job.
There are just a few tiny nit-picks that would make this even better!

You were taken so quick,

My heart was torn in two as you left,

If love could have saved you, you would have lived forever.

Hello there.

I have to get this out real fast, this was beautiful. It's short and sweet, but I wouldn't be able to say anything else about it. This has really touched my heart.

I notice you put 'realistic' as a genre. This must have happened to you. I feel so bad for you, and I hope you get better. It's good that you've shared your story with us, though.

-huez