Hello there, it's Kristina here
I feel very curious about your poem. It is very short, with only 3 verses. But still, it makes the readers think.
I think that this poem is perfect for the first stanza (paragraph) of a poem, so I would have really expected that you continued your poem. I think it would have been interesting, since the beginning sounds fascinating.
Everyone can interpret your poem in different ways, so I am going to tell you my point of views.
"I stare up at the sky
And remember the star
That used to shine."
When I first read this poem, the first thing that came to my mind was that you might be talking about a person, who is now dead, and now you are really missing this person, that you feel that void inside you.
So yeah, I think that "star" is referred to a lost person.
Or else, it could be that you are really missing your past. For example, a past relationship.
Anyway, I hope to read more from you!!
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