Well, this was extremely unexpected. I can't control my laughter from this.
Strange here, and I have a review for this.
Oh, god. This is sad yet hilarious. I'm sorry for saying this, but wow. It has a great idea in it. "The g isn't capitalized." You took my heart out and kept it. Its sad, looking at a relationship separating, but the way it started and how sexual it is is fantastic. I give you props. A good poem about relationships. This has to be one of my favorite poems in the last couple of months. Bravo, Sbitoni!
Overall, fantastic.
I can't rate this, because no rate can capture this.
Great job
Keep writing
Stay groovy, my friend *hair flips*
Points: 500
Reviews: 417
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