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A Uranium bomb strong enough to submerge the entire western coast?
Gah. I don't believe it. Plutonium with a water boost? If laced unter the san andreas fault, yeah. But again, I want to know the Science behind this Fiction.
Cuz the random Sci Fi injection here is a nice change of pace, but rather unexplored.
I'm sad I got lazy and missed this...
Dang, I am SO far behind. Think I could catch up in one night? XD
That was really good. I want to know the science behind what ever the heck is going on but... Since I don't even know what is going on...there isn't much chance of me being told one, or the other. Loved it.
Holy crap!
I cant believe I've never read your stuff before, this was amazing. I was like on the edgeof my seat the whole time.
Nicholas seems like a not nice wrod. Good job.
XD this is one crazy man you've created Brad! But of course interesting and I love it. What I loved the most was that, as you were going into the scientific words and such, I actually understood! (*gasp* I know!)... Besides that, it was wonderful. I'm really getting into this and so far it's only given away parts of Ch. I still want to finish that by they way, and I know I'll have to wait, I'm just telling you that I shall finish it one way or another.
Can't wait to read more!
~Rieda