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*shivers* gah. This is so amazingly edible!!!
And that sounds hilarious.
OMG They destroyed Kyle too!? Now Jon seems more sane than ever, it seemed that as soon as he saw Kyle his senses came back to him. Kyle however, forgot Jon completely? That's terrible! Didn't this place know how Jon would react if he saw Kyle sitting on his bed? I really didn't expect to see Kyle sitting there with Jon. If this is another one of Jon's dream thingys I'm gonna freak out because I'm so happy that "Le Kyle" isn't dead!
Whoa, I'm really hyped right now, you don't even know! So Ariel is probably alive too, and they were doing what they were doing to Jon to Ariel and Kyle too? They must have gone further though. I mean, even Jon remembers Kyle and Ariel. But Kyle doesn't remember Jon, what did they do to HIM?
God I can't wait for the next! This was great Brad!
~Rieda