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This flash back was depressing....
I love how you randomly give us flashbacks, that are meaningful to the relationship and remind us that this story isn't just zombies and conspiracy theories and rape and all that.
Aww, this was really beautiful and sad. I loved your analogies throughout the whole thing. It all sort have felt like a poem, it flowed very nicely. This was when Jon was going to leave Kyle? I do love the flashbacks of them together. I hope so much that they can find some sort of way because they obviously need each other. Or do they just need each other to need each other? Do they just want to be needed by the other person? Hmm, that would make sense, not the kind of Kyle/Jon sense I always want, but a very romantic sense. Can't wait for the next Brad, this was a very nice one to read.
~Rieda