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Flash backs are cute ^.^
*informs you she read this one*
I should try telling someone I love them, and ask them not to respond. We'll see how that goes.
XD this was so cute! I think the first part was in Ch. though? I can't help but remember the wimpy Jon as Ariel jumped on him thing and Kyle telling Jon to go to sleep early. Oh I love flashbacks, they were so sweet and "innocent" when they were little, and still hot!
More Pro. please!
~Rieda