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Where is this big bang to answer questions you were talking about?
CMP=Darma :-p yay!I guess it was worth staying up for. I have to admit I like seeing Kyle talk about Jon
He's going to betray Jon?! I don't think he can, can he? Jon is like the world to him right? And Ariel has no feeling for Jon or Kyle whatsoever?
Wow Brad this is go there as well. The monkey was so cute! But I'm sort of suspicious about Donny, I mean, I really don't know why, I probably shouldn't be lol. I'm just getting a feeling. Usually something bad happens to the cute fuzzy ones. lol
Oh I really hope that Ariel finds some sensitivity in her somewhere, she has to have some feelings...I think, and Sarah too! These are badass women you have here. I feel bad for Jon and Kyle, lol, but this makes the plot so interesting and intruiging. Great job!
~Rieda