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I love the French mythology you are adding in. I'd love it if you told me more on it. And those men? Creepy as ever! True end-of-the-world men for you...
And the thing? Ankou? Weeeeird. People shooting things? weeeeird. But always good.
Ooo this was very nice and very different! I still don't know who this character is but I'm starting to really like her, and this shadow thing!
This plot is just taking so many interesting twists I love it! I also liked the thought that we were back in "civilization" you know, sex slaves and such. Instead of insane therapists and Jon/Kyle destroyers. Lol
Great Job!
~Rieda