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Oh great now Jon is in trouble? Great! More suspence and I'm guessing the answering of questions is...far off? Again I say that I hope it is. Ch. is way to wonderful to be answered right now. Again, again, again, and again I say, I love the way you end each chapter. It's like I know that the end is going to be the bomb, but I'm still surprised at the variety you've created. Each one literally leads on to the next in like a perfect pattern and I was secretly hoping you'd do Ch. #36 from Jon's perspective, lol even though I said that I wanted it from Kyle's I forgot that I hadn't read from Jon's side in a while and it was so worth it.
I also can't wait until Jon sees Ariel, I mean, he's gonna flip....right? (is asking for more clues)
Anyway, you know that I absolutely loved it! Now I'm dying to read #37 which is...omg already up? See ya!
Your biggest fan,
~Rieda
Actually, can't you look up cell phones on the web? Perhaps I'm wrong in this.
Why French? XD Is there a reason behind this? It's usually Spanish.
Very accurate portrayal.
The way you talk about his anger makes it flash like a sign in Vegas, I'm wondering if it has more significance than general emotion? Or perhaps I'm looking into this too much like I do with LOST?