I just have one thing: Sarah guesses she is above the ocean, but without anything to make sense of this, why should she guess they are above the ocean? And then having it be true a little while later....eh.
Oh, and this:
OMFG LOST! lol.Suddenly a rift of turbulence jostled them as they descended.
Poor Sarah! I actually kinda feel bad for her now. She almost got raped and now she's in France?! I swear I couldn't predict any of this even if I tried, lol.I loved this one! Sarah, sorry to say it, is a bitch and diserves this... that is if she's really the person I thought she was...or she couldn't be, she could be on the good side who knows?
You get my mind going everytime I read one of these. Though none of my predictions prove right lol, I like that, usually I can imagine the whole rest of the story from about two chapters but with Ch....well, you know what I mean, I'm at a loss for words. Excellent. Bravo!
Keep it up!
~Rieda
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