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They're so mean to Jon...!
And if this is Kyle's story, where is he?
This was great! Dr. Hasser is really starting to tick me off for making Jon feel this way. So, I'm going to through some thoughts out there.
I don't think Jon is crazy. I'm starting to realize that this is a normal yet intensified version of Jon's original character. He usually acts like this, his thoughts usually judge people's characters and he only shows that he's really ticked off when he reaches his breaking points or is brought out of his comfort zones. He is just put to his breaking point so often lately that it makes he appear that he's crazy? I'm not sure but that's what I'm thinking right now.
Also, I think Jon knows how he feels about Kyle, just feelings wise not what to do about those feelings. I believe that he's just afraid of what Kyle feels. It seems that Kyle's feelings change too often for him and once he deals with one set of feelings then Kyle switches to a whole other set. Therefore I think that Kyle is the more confused one. Kyle IS starting to figure some things out and show "real" feeling though so they're both dealing right now willingly or unwillingly.
I love this hospital thing for Jon though as well. At first it seems like it's helping, then it seems like it's not helping, but all the while...it's helping his character.He's starting to look deep into the relationship that is usually sugarcoated and without conversation. I'm loving it, this plot is the bomb Brad! I really can't wait to read more!
~Rieda