Ariel! I know I said I hated her like...maybe four minutes ago, but she's such an interesting character. I can only guess what Jon is feeling and that guess would probably be underestimated. Such a situation. Kyle did betray Jon! He may not have meant to but he took him to Chionophobia (Yay I found out what it is...well in the general sense) anyway.
Jon is so stuck. He has Sarah, Kyle, and now Ariel? I feel sorry for him, but I'm starting to think that he'll hate Ariel soon enough and get it through his head that Sarah isn't the one (like he was thinking before) and then stay with Kyle, the true love of his life. *sigh* But of course conflict, as your doing now. lol.
Kyle got his ass kicked again! Woo! I'm sorry, I don't know why I'm in love with these scenes. It's just that hurting your characters proves to be appealing to me, as simple as that. lol
Oh and it also scares me that Jon is so much stronger than Kyle. I always though Kyle the more physically fit one and this took me by surprise. And it was really cute when Kyle carried Jon all the way to the room! I'm upset with Kyle but, you can't really be too upset with Kyle, at least not for long periods of time.
This was hilarious Bradness, you pulled off jokes in parts of intense action really wonderfully. *claps hands*
Keep it up!
~Rieda
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