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I adore these scenes. And this chapter is the most shocking of them. That voice that spoke now speaks to us, and mentions Jon, and--Aliens? I don't know what to think.
I love how vivid that is. Beautiful.I'm excited. The more and more I read, the more I know this will be published. There isn't a way it won't. If this is your rough draft, I'm sure the final is beautiful. I caught some errors, but what is the point in saying so? :-p
This was great, I think the most descriptive out of all the Pros with the camera.
We've all seen it. It's watched all of us at one point or another. It is the hand just above the back of your neck; the shadow at the end of the hall that watches you glance over your shoulder. It is the ruffle of papers, the listless whispering you hear before you fall asleep. It is the tension in your jaw, the pain in your head.
**This gave me the heeby jeebies. Lol, I was looking over my shoulder when I read this. And I loved the theme music!
~Rieda