I adore these scenes. And this chapter is the most shocking of them. That voice that spoke now speaks to us, and mentions Jon, and--Aliens? I don't know what to think.
I'm excited. The more and more I read, the more I know this will be published. There isn't a way it won't. If this is your rough draft, I'm sure the final is beautiful. I caught some errors, but what is the point in saying so? :-p
I love how vivid that is. Beautiful.I can feel its spindly fingers looping around my stomach and clenching upwards, forcing me to purge my insides
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