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holy snoot. I'm really enjoying this.
I feel i should say more but i cant see anything new to comment
You know, I feel so wrong reading this online. It's too good to be online. *sobs* It better get published...
Was good; shall I say more?
This was wonderful! I could actually apply my element knowledge to know what you were talking about.
*feels proud*
Nicholas is mean but also a really fun character I like the way he made the Ms. Clinton react and how she agreed. I can really imagine that happening considering our president would save his butt over ours any day. lol
And now I have another waiting to read! Loved it Bradness!
~Rieda
Very suspenseful! I'm liking Nicholas a lot.
This is kind of cliché. Oh no, I would never kill you, but I can't say the same for ol' Brutus here. :p
The dialogue is my favorite part of your writing. I can tell who's talking because the character's personality shows through in every line. There's not a word extra. Have I said that before? I think so, actually.
Hehe, I wonder what comes next.
-Jane