Prosthesis #12 /P

by Incandescence

Published April 1, 2007

In Chionophobia/Prosthesis/Melnikov

Removed.

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Alteran
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Alteran commented Comment · Apr 8, 2007

holy snoot. I'm really enjoying this.

I feel i should say more but i cant see anything new to comment :)

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Emerson
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Emerson wrote a review Review · Apr 7, 2007

"Ms. Clinton,"
Is she not married? I am not too clear on these things, but then should it not be Mrs. Clinton? I may be wrong.

You know, I feel so wrong reading this online. It's too good to be online. *sobs* It better get published...

Was good; shall I say more?

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Riedawriter23
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Riedawriter23 wrote a review Review · Apr 2, 2007

This was wonderful! I could actually apply my element knowledge to know what you were talking about. :) *feels proud*

Nicholas is mean but also a really fun character I like the way he made the Ms. Clinton react and how she agreed. I can really imagine that happening considering our president would save his butt over ours any day. lol

And now I have another waiting to read! Loved it Bradness!

~Rieda

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Jennafina
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Jennafina wrote a review Review · Apr 2, 2007

Very suspenseful! I'm liking Nicholas a lot.

My friends, however, they do not share my taste in elegance.

This is kind of cliché. Oh no, I would never kill you, but I can't say the same for ol' Brutus here. :p

The dialogue is my favorite part of your writing. I can tell who's talking because the character's personality shows through in every line. There's not a word extra. Have I said that before? I think so, actually.

Hehe, I wonder what comes next. :)

-Jane



Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality