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This was wonderful. I need more! More I tell you. I'm addicted to your writing, it's just so awesome and I feel like all of your characters are real and alive with these problems. And I agree with Claud, I loved the ending XD!
WOW. This was just perfect. No errors.
I loved the end. "Like I always do." hee hee hee.
Why was Jon so hesitant to speak about Danielle? Are they having an affair like I guessed might happen! Or was she really upset?
I want more. Hurry up. Or, as you yourself said, I will castrate you.