Chionophobia #51 /P

by Incandescence

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Published March 17, 2007

In Chionophobia/Prosthesis/Melnikov

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Emerson
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Emerson wrote a review Review · Mar 18, 2007

Jonathon dropped his hands to his side and stood under the bright fluorescent lights. [s]The[/s]
very interesting "the"

"See? None of that. No jokes. If I bare my soul to you, you have to promise not to make jokes."
makes me think of sawyer cutting the nicknames out. Had to find a lost connection somewhere, it was getting a while since I saw one XD

He had just fleshed out the last bits of Jon's humanity and now the world was taking them too.
Should that be singular?

Aww they were going to have a baby.... and it died.... XP yes, it was very sad...I liked it *nods* good job Brad!

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Riedawriter23
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Riedawriter23 wrote a review Review · Mar 18, 2007

*Cries* That was sad. :(

At first I was happy because Jon and Kyle were getting along and in the back of my head I knew that this was when Ariel was going to die. I'm just so attached to Jon that I felt it too. This was a really great, you have a wonderful way of making your readers feel what your characters are feeling.

Who was this other person? There was Ariel and...he? I should probably know who this is or something right?

Well. Brilliant Bradness!
~Rieda



Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
— Snoink