Young Writers Society

I liked it. As always.

But: Where this is in the time zone has caught me off guard. After Ch, I suppose, but I just can't place it which made it somewhat hard for me to understand in the larger picture; in the smaller view of things though, it was well done. I'm not entirely sure where it is in the time line of things matters anyway, but it still nagged at me that I couldn't place it.

This was great Brad. The word usage was amazing, but of course I would expect that of you lol. You're teasing me! Another flashback like thing and I'm getting so wrapped up in the old Jon and Kyle, I have to remind myself that they're not like that anymore. Clever Brad . Can't wait to read the next!

~Rieda