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I honestly have to say I hated this chapter xD Simply because Haaser was saying a whole lot of stuff you said in that thing you sent me, and so the whole time all I could hear was you. I still laughed really hard at the spit joke, though....
Otherwise, good chapter
I havent read it all because I have to go
But I love the start its great
XD, I was wondering what you were getting at for a second. All this toilet talk and I thought to myself...This has to mean something, it has to have a big picture behind it, And it did
. You're so brilliant! Poor Kyle, my stomach is twisting because I have the feeling that we're getting closer and closer to the betrayal. 
The audio clip is loading right now!:) Can't wait to read the next!
~Rieda