I'm seven through and I'm still interestd. I agree with most of the others, it was a bit confusing, but at least its beginning to come together.
As usual, your writing is superb; I did however, feel that the last installment of this contained rather stiff dialogue (as Mesh pointed out). This section (chapter?) makes amends for that though. Sooner or later I'll find the time for more...
Good job =]
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