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I like this, and now I'm starting to wonder more and more who it writing this (character-wise) because this one had no camera scenes, and felt more like a letter. Haaser came to mind, for almost no reason other than the relation to CMP.
I also liked how this sort of pulled in the title of the novel, prosthesis. It spoke of the prosthetics of life, and such. It's pulling the strings together.
you didnt right this.
this is the recolection theory of Antony Hopkins .
you are a thief.
- only kidding , ehhehe
one of the best things ive ever read , (non-fiction wise)
it hurts us to see someone as young as you write stuff like that , tone it down.
i looked for wrongs and for nothing . exept for a little detail ;
the collapse of governmental systems, they fled to Germany. There, under the direction of Adam Weishaupt, they created the Order of the Illuminati, which literally means Order of the Enlightened
too many commers , its aggitaitating and prevents flow.
Be great - rod
Wow Brad, this was amazing. You'd have to be incredibly smart to write something like this, and I've been wowed with every chapter:).
Those are very odd circumstances. I really haven't thought about all of the odd coincidences in the world, or at least not that deeply. It makes everything a little more eerie and Pros. is starting to seem more and more like an actual event. I mean, who knows what's going on in the world right now? Great job on this! Can't wait for the next!
~Rieda