Prosthesis #64 /P

by Incandescence

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Published June 10, 2007

In Chionophobia/Prosthesis/Melnikov

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Riedawriter23
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Riedawriter23 wrote a review Review · Jun 10, 2007

:( I can't believe Ariel was going to make Jon kill himself. Pull the trigger? She's freaking crazy, man, like seriously. But I do think that Jon can get through to her. Jon has the power to do things like that, you know like calm people and change people...in a good way, but also in a bad way. I just hope that if he does happen to get through to Ariel, that he kills her afterwards while she's distracted ;) . Can't wait to read the next, Great Pros.!

~Rieda

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Emerson
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Emerson wrote a review Review · Jun 10, 2007

aieee... You kill me with this, Dear Brad.

I won't argue over the 'help' thing... ech. Ariel is a major b-, and Jon makes me want to cry!! *gasp* It's so sad!!!

*deep breath* This is thrilling, and I love it. Please tell me I get to learn what the black goo does soon? This chapter was so loaded. It was awesome-o-rific!



Turn your demons into art, your shadow into a friend, your fear into fuel, your failures into teachers, your weaknesses into reasons to keep fighting. Don’t waste your pain. Recycle your heart.
— Andréa Balt