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God! Ariel is such a badass! I really didn't expect her to be like this, but it was for the better. It makes Ch. even more interesting which I thought to be impossible. I'm really suspicious of her as well. I can't even come up with a question that secretly hides a clue because there would be too many and it would be too obvious. You're going to have to let me in at some point I mean, my stomach does frontflips every time I'm about to read a chapter. I don't think that's healthy...but I like it lol. *sigh* I got what I wanted! The Kyle and Ariel thing has returned. She's mean! But like hot and testy at the same time. I can tell she's not someone you really want to mess with. Not to mention that she knocked Jon down in one of the flashbacks. I can tell she's tough.
Okay so now I need more Bradness! The more Ch. the better, there are soooo many possibilities..... (asking for a clue?)
Ah I love you!
~Rieda
I'm such a proof reader! I feel so misused...
to speak.*claps* So, yeah, it was worth the read. No, it isn't starting to suck. And actually, it wasn't all that boring. Wasn't like OMG shocking, but thats good. It has ebb and flow. That's good.
You know, it's kind of like the rape charges: Exactly who beat him a few chapters back, and why? It's like now he's all good and fine, doesn't care he got the crap beat out of him. Since we don't know the reason behind it, it seems unnatural.