Eh.
I'm not entirely sure I'll continue reading this. Sure, it may pick up in a few pieces and you'll probably drive me up a wall until I read it, but for now it's bland. You're running off of the characters, and as much as I love them, it's ran dry. CMP isn't interesting unless something crazy is happening. Sure you need down time, but the beginning of a novel isn't for down time or for confusion. It's like nothing is happening. Why would I want to read a novel where nothing is happening?
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