Okay, again. I'm different. I did feel sorry for Sarah in this. I didn't know that she was doing all of this for Jon, otherwise I'd probably have liked her more in the past lol. I think she's a big character though sort of hidden. She's important because she comes with her own conflicts, her personality still reflects a bitches and she's important to Jon. That's what I love about her. She can be moved around and placed in almost any which way because she's such a flexible character. Every story has to have at least one of those.
And your ending! Who is it? Bad person:( ? Good person:) ? I have a feeling that you won't tell me the answer so I'll do you a favor and just wait for once. lol
Can't wait to read the next! Great Job.
~Rieda
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