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Wow.
It is beyond amazing to see this event through Kyle's mind. And he is so tortured...I could ramble on and on and on about that. It's just horrible, so emotionally wrenching. And you know what Jon feels about this... it's just terrible.
wow... Your flash backs are so emotional. Like I said, these flash backs pull the "emotional" confusion in with the present, happening confusion.
Gah... I love CMP.
Awww,
. What's wrong with Kyle. He could have finally told Jon that he loved him. I understand though, everything that was going on in his mind. It's just so terribly sad to know that he doesn't think that he's good enough for Jon. If he only knew the things that Jon thought about, how broken Jon would become in the future at the just the memory of him. If they could only read each other's minds. Then everything could possibly figure itself out? I think that they would offend each other...quite a lot actually, but they'd get a first person understanding of what the other was really feeling. Because they may struggle in their minds sometimes but eventually, the truth is always somewhere in their heads, they just never voice it. I can't believe there were 3 whole flashbacks in a row. 
Can't wait for the next!
~Rieda