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Does he hate himself for being unsure, for being honest, or for trying to be redeemable? The most likely one is the latter, but still it could be read as him hating the uncertainty. Unless only I see this.
Should the 'her' be 'him'? It depends on the meaning of it, really, "She just wrote to him [emails]" or "She just wrote her emails" as in the emails belong to 'her'. See my point? Maybe XD I think I confused myself even...
You know, I'm so putting my bets on Sarah. I put it on her last Ch, and I'm putting it on her on this one again. I suppose Chionophobia (Fear of snow, so I've heard?) Is the 'disease'? But these are all my guesses
Constantly loving how you work things. Come on, if you love me so much for being with Ch since it's inception, you're going to send me a signed copy, right?
God I love this! This story is getting better and better with every Ch. I read. I make it a daily routine to keep up with this thing. That's major because usually I'm only into fantasy. Kyle is developing at a quick pace, Jon is changing, the cops are after both of them in a way, Sarah is still in play and action and then the suspence at the end that tells there is something dramatic to come kills me. Great Job!
-Rieda