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A typo, I'm afraid. =]
is laugh in the right tense?
A thread/threatening.
Lovely way to bring back that plot line
What?
OK, are you messing with us, or is this a typo?
Son of a -----! So Jonathan's in danger huh?
*Sarah slammed the door and clicked the locks into place. Kyle suddenly felt very aware of everything in the hallway: its emptiness, the mosquito on the ceiling. He considered going back to his room, but decided to venture out, just a little.*
You meant Ariel there right?
Omg. That was badass. When you said answers...I thought you were joking with me to be totally honest. Chionophobia is a secret agency? Sadly that means I was wrong when I guessed lol. But...oh wow, that was just an amazing Ch.
Everyone's involved! Ariel, Sarah, Jon, Kyle, not to mention two agencies...was the fake agency that went to visit Jon...Chionophobia, or a third agency?
And you don't know who's on who's side! Such suspence and very well displayed.
I can't wait until Ch. #40!
~Rieda