"Hush," Kyle interrupted. "This vavcation is non-negotiable.
*vavcation=vacation. That was all I saw wrong that hasn't already been said.
On that not, I really liked this! I think it was a great addition to the previous chapter. The Kyle/Jon thing still makes me extremely happy though I was discouraged by the way Kyle reacted to the whole date thing. They're adorable together. Oh and during the part where Jon was saying he wasn't ready...I was so lost. I could have sworn they were talking about something else...but I got it after a couple of seconds, lol. I'm, starting right after I post this, waiting impatiently for the next post! No pressure .
~Rieda
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