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*gasp* I knew Ariel was being sneaky! And that phone number.... weird. I love the media integration! Still haven't watched the video (I have to download quick time...)
Watched the video....Wow. Where are you getting these things??? Reminded me of "rage" from 28 days later. (Having just seen this movie, everything makes me think of it...) Although...without the zombies and stuff xD Or are they zombies!? Those are beyond creepy.
Seriously, Ariel, she's just a liar always, always. Kyle should dump her! *finger snap*
Aha! I knew Ariel was evil. She can't be completely good, it just seems so impossible. But she hurt Jon! I don't know how much more hurt Jon can take. I'm guessing now that since he's a little pissed at Ariel, Kyle will come back into his life...at least until Kyle comes and tries to destroy him. Wow, I'm really starting to believe that Jon can be destroyed. I hope with all that I have that he isn't. Especially by Kyle. Very nice job on this! Can't wait to read the next one.
~Rieda