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WOW! I loved this, I think this was your best one so far! It was dramatic everywhere, I didn't see this coming at all and I'm wondering if it will push Sarah and John away from each other and then let Kyle in because he sees what he was missing, or something the exact opposite. I don't even know what's to happen next, and your title, I can't wait to see where you'll put that part in. Great job on this, you definitley know how to expand your supporting characters!