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I'm kind of confused by where they are living. I get this impression that it's like some odd kind kind of locked up community. Jon is their ambulance. And from what I remember of some other parts, that's the impression I get. but it's never explained and things... yeah.
For a second I thought that her eyes were going to start leaking from her skull and that she was going to go choke Kyle. Lol, I can understand why Jon is getting so crazy though, but the CMP and the party thing was over the top...though you never know. He could be right. He usually is. I keep wondering now, what did Kyle do to save Jon really? I'm thinking of a deal that he might have made...but I'm still working on that theory. Lol. Going to read the next! Great job!
~Rieda