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Perhaps I am only your error catcher?
single quote instead of double quote.I don't like how that reads.
doubled your apostrophe there, huh?
As always, you are amazing.
I love the constant tension between Jon and Kyle. Even if it isn't mentioned, you know it's there. And you dug into the love some more. I like how human your story is, how much I can relate to it.
Are you happy now? And if you don't finish, I'll shoot you. And if you don't publish, I'll shoot who ever denied you.
I think it was very well writen. Is Jonathon a doctor? I was a little confused about that but otherwise i think your story was pretty well writen.