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Oooo, this is fun. Haven't gone to the media yet, thought I'd post first.
So we're getting more about CMP? And being led into Melnikov, it's wonderful. I liked this chapter, even if it was a chapter built around info dumps on CMP, media, and the freaky French thing ^_^
Now off to look at the media!
Ah! Now she has more control? Goodness! I hate those little black oil needles as well. Lol, it gives me the creeps when it's stabbed into someone's eye.
, I was surprised to see how far back CMP went back. Whoa, shutting it down will be like...whoa.
Great job!!!
She's trying to save Kyle? I don't believe it. I mean I kinda have to since the thought came from her first hand, but still. Killing Jon would have broken him. Kyle still has that gun on him, right? hehe, I know exactly what he should do with it!
And you're brilliant Brad!
The audio clips are loading on my ipod currently.
~Rieda