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You know what is sad Is it took the word "Gossing" for me to realize this is the same kid from before. X_X
There is something weird in this sentence. I just can't figure out what it is.
Maybe I got lost somewhere. Maybe I'm confused. Isn't it "Him"
I finally realized what was going on. The only reason I keep the above is because maybe I'm not the only reader that would get confused. (Maybe I wasn't paying full attention at the beginning...)
yay! Epidemics! wooo!
I liked the end. I want more. I'm not going to ramble about how much I like Ch anymore
I loved this as well. It was Amazing. I was a little concerned and surprised at Danielle's behavior... either that or your going to work it into your story which is definitley possible. I also loved your word usage. I understood the words a little (because of my mom's occupation at a lab and as an MA and medical major) but you don't even have to know what the words mean to understand what you were saying because of your great description! This was Great, and I loved how you finally had an imput of when Jon is on call and running through the hospital, it's nice to see the doctor in action! lol. Keep up the great work!