Young Writers Society

Jon watched Kyle walk into the bathroom and pull the door to.

what's with you and not finishing your sentences lately?

"I just feel like one of those pathetic character in some ill-conceived story."

XD it's funny to read that.... in a story.

Always good to read Ch ^_^ I suppose Jon might finally be realizing Kyle's worth? But is Kyle getting anything out of this?

This is starting to turn into a real book for me, I had to do what I do when I read novels and I'm worried something surprising is coming up: I had to cover up the last few paragraphs with my hands. My eyes unnaturally jump down and look at stuff, if I catch words I might ruin the surprise. But there wasn't much to ruin but a good moment

I thought you should know the affect Ch was having on me :-p