So, was he bleeding with the cuts (and when had it happened?) or were these older wounds? I assume he had gone to their bedroom, cut, and then came out? But it still left me a little lost.
I would have really liked to have seen more talking from him, more....anything. But I can feel that that isn't right, this is how this chapter is supposed to be.
All I can say is: Hurry up and f'ing write more before I get pissy with you!!! lol. See, I caught up, and now you have a cranky fan to deal with.
This sentence is in the present tense. Even if it is on purpose, it doesn't fit with everything else.Jon gives it back to her and she closes her eyes to let the shadows be swallowed up into the light.
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