Chionophobia #31 /P

by Incandescence

Published February 20, 2007

In Chionophobia/Prosthesis/Melnikov

Removed.

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Emerson
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Emerson wrote a review Review · Feb 22, 2007

He pulled up the boy’s chart. His name was Damon.
OMFG, its Damon again!

just to make sure it was a figment of his imagination.
should it be "wasn't"?

“I—“ he cleared his through, “I didn’t see anything.”
throat.

Very creepy. I don't feel like asking questions (Head is aching) but as always, I enjoy it.

-Rieda (aka your BIGGEST fan)


you know she is a lier, don't you? I proof read for you, and discuss with you! And I'm not a fan, I'm an admirer!

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Ofour
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Ofour commented Comment · Feb 20, 2007

"he cleared his through," - I think you mean "throat".

This was brilliant, you continue to amaze. Please can you give some anwers soon, the waiting is killing me.

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Riedawriter23
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Riedawriter23 wrote a review Review · Feb 20, 2007

This was great! Now we're back to the serious medical stuff and back to Jon. Wonderful! I loved all the medical problems that were going on that was nice, now I REALLY can't wait to see what's next. Everything is reaching its breaking point and I'm dying for answers that are soon to come. You end these things so perfectly!


More, more, more Ch.!
-Rieda (aka your BIGGEST fan)



This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy