I ...don't really like the last part. Joanne or who ever suddenly got a boost of emotions that should be left to main characters XDShe saw in him the uncontrollable desire to self-destruct so prominent in every man she had ever loved, and it made her sad to see Jonathon this way.
Licking?He saw the black hair licking at the back of one of his patient’s chairs.
I don't think 'began' fits here, because she was already crying before.. 'began again' might work though.She began crying as she left his office.
I can see Sarah and Jons relationship between the lines, you say so little but I see so much. Love it.
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